Class Feedback

Class feedback

“Love the shots of knife and the girl, like the last shot, more pace needed towards the end”

“Beginning is really intriguing, shots used are very effective, last shot is nice”

“Good camera work, good use of music, might need more pain shown throughout”

“Good sound, good blinking editing, didn’t like the windy sound, too much like a short story”

“Good mixture of shots, end shot was very good, some of the shots with the little girl looked too set up, too much eye contact with the camera, unsure if the music fits the beginning”

“Love the set, maybe a better transition from the church to the school”

“abrupt ending, like the bit where the girl in the red is whispering quick shots, not enough on the Satanists, more in the school”

“Editing was really good, the use of flashing adds more suspense, the use of flashback and black and white helped cement the story, the start was a bit slow, changing scenes with no context, flashback to school”

“Like the edit on the text, needs more pace i.e. music needs to become faster”

“Hanging shot looks pretty damn good, some of the audio needs to be redubbed – quality or audio is different enough to be distracting, genre captured well”

“Desaturation worked really well so set tone, quick shots created really nice tempo, awesome final shot, could do with a more contrasting pace at the beginning and end, the background music didn’t really match the tempo of the video”

“Good music is effective, good use of shots, could do with more voiceover perhaps, needs to be quicker pace and more action”

“Music fits well, lighting is done well, improve by adding more about the family and make it a tad faster”

“Good use of diegetic sound, screeching of doors, good use of after effects on titles, non-diegetic music could change, better flow, nice variety of shots, good religious satanic theme”

“Good use of child, changing colours, location is good, make it more fast-paced towards the end, alter intertitles”

“Opening shots cut very fast, good shots when running away, could use more scares, don’t really know what’s going on at the start”